"Radiative cooling" seems too scientific to use in a Haiku-poem.
When the phenomenon of radiative cooling occurs, usually it frosts.
In Haiku word we use "frost descends (from the heaves)" as a winter word.
And as a autumn word, we use "gather dew".
We haven't had the first frost yet, even though we have had very cold morning.
Not frost descent, sever coldness, not to reach the pass
At the dawn of the day with frost, sounds of a mortar bike (for a delivery man of newspapers), GOKUROUSAM (thank you for your efforts)
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Ah yes, the sounds of a very noisy, very early motor bike...I remember it well! It was my (too early) alarm clock every morning! 🏍😴😩 jan
I know it!!!! Jan.
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