I continue learning English Haiku. Unfortunately I have no members to study together. But anyway I keeping making English Haiku alone while I keep learning Japanese Haiku by receiving corrections by mail once a month.
This month my three Haiku poems got grade A.
Through the window, dazzlingly green rice plants, waiting for seeing a doctorlingering rainy season; ironing sportswear of my husbands
In rainy season, temporary sunny day seats occupies , laundry poles
Today's drill is using onomatopoeia.
In Japanese we have lots of onomatopoeia, but in English ----. I don't know about them.
Anyway I tried to making some Haiku using kind of onomatopoeia.
If someone gets some advice, I'm really happy.
From the tap, trickling little by little, after summer shower
Against sweltering heat, twist the cork out, swooshing
IN the Corona pandemic hear the sea sound in the head, with glittering
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